Week 2: Lessons 6-10

Lesson 6: If you had a million dollars, would you change your house or buy new property? Where would you like to move?

Message: I don´t think that I´ll buy a house or any property, I´ll spend the money traveling worldwide without hesitation.
You could also say: "I'll spend the money traveling around the world". 

"around the world" is a common phrase used with the verb "to travel"

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Message: I would like to buy a new house, near to the sea, maybe in miami or montreal, but o i ll think carefully because i dont like a cold weather and maybe i would prefer a flat than a house because of the view

You can eliminate the indefinite article "a" because you're talking about a general and plural noun. 

I like warm weather.
I enjoy music. 
I love nature.

When the nouns are general and not countable/plural, you don't need "a". 

But when the nouns are singular and countable, you include "a". So nice job with the following! 
...buy a new house...
...prefer a flat than a house...

^^ these are all correct! :) 

Lesson 7: How have you changed as you’ve gotten older?

Message: I have changed a lot. First of all, I have debts and a boss. I think the most obvious way that I changed is that the experiences in life made me grow up and be a better person with every lesson; also every person on my path had something to teach me. ✓ Wonderful job, I couldn't find any grammatical errors! :)

Lesson 8: How did your parents meet?

Message: My Parentsparents met here in Colombia in 1956. √

My mom was from Apulo Cundinamarca, and my father was from mesitas del colegio. √

Both are from colombiaColombia, so they only speak spanishSpanish. √

My father was working in a factory where he fell in love and after that he got married to her. √ << Excellent job! I added a couple prepositions. 

Lesson 9: Where do you work? What things do you like about your job, and what things do you dislike?

Message: I like to keep in touch with the students and teacherteachers, but I dislike to send bad reports.

You could also say: I dislike sending bad reports. "Dislike" is a verb that's frequently followed by a gerund. 

Message: I work on my new proyectoproject of pop up.
You could also say:
"I work on my new pop-up project"

I work in my home. ✓
I like to imagine how the mechanismesmechanisms on the pieces will move. ✓

Lesson 10: How are you feeling at this moment in your life? Describe your emotions.

Message: Hi! I'm a medical assistant like a secretary. My last week was full, very busy because I have a lot of patients to give appointments, (you could also replace "give appointments" with "schedule appointments") I received many calls and WhatsApps messages to answer, work at 10pm. FilledI feel tired yes!

Depending on what you were trying to say, you could rewrite this as: 

But thankfully, I am blessed to have a job

But I am thankful and blessed to have a job